In this video James Maroney and Guy Milone discuss what makes a good college admission essay. Guy gives tips on telling the story and some examples of essays he has read in the past that truly resonated with him.
In this video, James Maroney of www.admissionhook.com interviews Paul Brower, Associate Director of Admission at Nichols College, about the personal statement. Paul gives examples of his favorite essays as well as some advice on what not to do when writing the college essay.
In this video, James Maroney of AdmissionHook.com interviews Matt Beirne, Director of Admission at the College of St. Benedict and St. John’s University, about the college admission essay. The cover tips on how to write the essay as well as some examples of Matt’s favorite essays over the past couple of years.
While there is really no topic you can write about that will guarantee your admission to the college of your dreams, there are definitely some things that you shouldn’t write about. In this post I want to share some examples of essays that should never have been written. The first example comes from my interview with Bryan Goss, Director of Undergraduate Admission at the University of Bridgeport. In the interview, Bryan tells about an essay in which a student who was a convicted drug dealer talks about his past without remorse. While it is ok to talk about past mistakes, you need to show how your learned from the mistake and take responsibility for your actions. The entire college search process should be about personal growth, so the essay should talk about not just what happened, but what you learned from the event and how you grew.
In this interview James Maroney of AdmissionHook.com gets great tips from Bryan Gross, Assistant Dean of Undergraduate Admission at the University of Bridgeport, on how to write the college essay or personal statement. They go over some essay topics to avoid and talk about how the essay fits in to the overall admission process.