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College Essay Success

Friday, January 15th, 2010

Congratulations! The fact that you are looking up tips on college essays indicates your desire to write a successful essay. Research is always the best way to start when it comes to targeting your audience. Just think about people in sales jobs – what better way to make that sale than to know what your potential customer wants? It is no different for you as a college applicant. You need to sell your college admissions audience on your potential as a member of their academic community. One of the best ways to do this is to write an interesting and convincing essay.

Five Important Tips for Writing Your College Essay

  1. Give Them What They’re Asking For – Be sure to answer the essay question given. It’s pretty basic but stick to the topic, develop it, and support it. In addition, be sure to write your essay specifically for that school. Don’t recycle your essays.
  2. Be Original – Imagine reading essay after essay. It’s no different from employers scouring resume after resume. Think about what is really significant and powerful to you and about you. If you write from the heart it will immediately draw in your audience. Use your natural style; don’t be overly formal and stilted. The essay reader wants to know what kind of person you are. Take a stand and support your information. A fearful, “trying-to-hard-to-say-what-you-want-to-hear” essay isn’t going to fool anyone. Remember, they read these en masse every year.
  3. Make it Easy to Read – Your content doesn’t have to be simplistic, but all readers desire content to be easy to read. No one wants to struggle through your essay. If your structure is poorly planned and executed, your reader may not even make it through to the end. Organization is very important. Always have a thesis and don’t stray from your topic. Support your thesis with interesting and solid information. Again, stick to the topic and don’t run-on, ramble, or take on an idea too wide to cover. Transition smoothly between supporting points and use a pleasing, neat format. Appearances are the first thing that will invite or turn-off your reader.
  4. Focus on the Future – Often you’ll have to provide background, like what you’ve learned and where you’ve come from in your essay. It’s all part of who you are. Yet, students often make the mistake of focusing too much on the past. Show that you are a forward-thinker. Discuss your intentions if possible – what you strive to accomplish and why. Admissions really needs to have more confidence about where you are going than where you have been.
  5. Prove Your Value – The role of a college’s admissions staff is to select the best from its pool of applicants. You must give your readers a reason to feel you’ll be an asset to the college. Your accomplishments, challenges, and attitudes will all show what kind of potential you have as a student and member of the campus, not to mention what kind of alumnus you will be. The college’s reputation is affected by the students they turn out and the successes they have. The value you bring has a lot to do with the value of the college itself. Don’t leave information up to interpretation, answer your essay with specific information that proves something (or many things) that are positive about you.
    Successfully implementing these five steps in your college essay will make your essay one that stands out among the rest. Your original, future-focused, easy-to-read, specific, value-proving essay will need only one more thing – proofreading! After all this hard work, don’t let careless errors ruin your well-crafted essay!

What Not to Write About in the College Essay

Sunday, September 20th, 2009

While there is really no topic you can write about that will guarantee your admission to the college of your dreams, there are definitely some things that you shouldn’t write about.  In this post I want to share some examples of essays that should never have been written.  The first example comes from my interview with Bryan Goss, Director of Undergraduate Admission at the University of Bridgeport.  In the interview, Bryan tells about an essay in which a student who was a convicted drug dealer talks about his past without remorse.  While it is ok to talk about past mistakes, you need to show how your learned from the mistake and take responsibility for your actions.  The entire college search process should be about personal growth, so the essay should talk about not just what happened, but what you learned from the event and how you grew.

Spotlight Essay Advice with Bryan Gross of the University of Bridgeport

Thursday, April 30th, 2009

In this interview James Maroney of AdmissionHook.com gets great tips from Bryan Gross, Assistant Dean of Undergraduate Admission at the University of Bridgeport, on how to write the college essay or personal statement.  They go over some essay topics to avoid and talk about how the essay fits in to the overall admission process.

5 Tips for Writing a Scholarship Essay

Friday, April 24th, 2009
While most people have already written their college admissions essay or personal statement by spring, we are now in

Dont Stress about your essay, read our tips.

Don't Stress about your essay, read our tips.

the middle of another essay season: scholarship essays.  While there are many similarities between a good college essay and a good scholarship essay, there are also many differences.  I have helped review scholarship applications for 5 different organizations.  In addition to giving out scholarships through admissionhook.com and collegetresure.com, I am the chair of the Devon Rotary Scholarship committee (we give out over $20,000 in scholarships annually) and helped develop a “scholarship general application” that is used by several of the non-profit organizations in my hometown of Milford, CT.  In this post I am going to share with you some advice on what makes a good scholarship essay.

  1. Know Your Audience.  What is the mission of the organization?  Typically, most local scholarships are given by community service organizations, so you will want to highlight your volunteer work in your essay.  It is always good to show in the essay that you took the time to research what the group does and that you know a little bit about their good works. Most groups spend the year raising the money to give away, so they would appreciate you acknowledging their efforts.  While you don’t want to appear to be a sycophant (I couldn’t help throwing a good SAT word in, in other words a kiss up), perhaps you could draw some parallels between some of your activities and activities that the group partakes in.
  2. Follow directions.  For our Rotary club, we evaluate students in 5 areas and one of them is thoroughness of application.  Read the directions.  Red them again, and give them only what they are looking for.  Most of these groups consist of volunteers.  This is not their full time job.  They do this to help out and give back to their community.  That being said, they most likely do a lot of other things as well, so they are short on time.  Do not fill your application with an abundance of extra letters of recommendation.  Make sure your essay is on topic.  Most importantly, make sure you submit your application on time.  Following directions is critical.
  3. Give them a reason to give you a scholarship.  Most organizations are looking to help out a student.  If you have overcome some obstacle, let them know.  However, don’t feel you need to make something up or try to make a small problem seem bigger than it really was.  If you do not have some extenuating circumstance that you have overcome, then write about what you hope to accomplish and what you expect to give back to your community.  Most groups see their scholarships as an investment in the future of their community.  Make them see that if they give you the scholarship it will be a wise investment.
  4. Be humble, but don’t be self effacing.  You do not want to brag or come across as arrogant, but don’t be afraid to tell them all the things that you have done.  If you don’t tell them, who will.  In high school I found out afterwards that I didn’t win a few scholarships because after I told my interviewers everything I did, I made it seem like it was no big deal.  Be proud of what you have done.  Tell them and then let them decide if they feel it is significant, don’t make decisions for them.
  5. Be yourself.  While it is great to look through the many sample essays on our site, the best essay is an essay that only you could have written.  It has to get across your passion and your accomplishments.  Look at sample scholarship essays for ideas, but don’t copy.

Best of luck and feel free to share your tips in the comments section.  I am about to begin reviewing applications for this years scholarships, so my next post will be a list of scholarship don’ts.