How to Write a Good Essay Using Essay Reviews
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So (never use “so”), you think that you write pretty good (well). However, every essay could use a bit of improvement. One of the most biggest mistakes students make is to ignore the opinions of others when writing their essays. You can greatly improve your chances of admission into your first choice college by using essay reviews to improve your college admissions essay (don’t write in the second-person). Here are a few tips (too blunt):
The first step in using essay reviews is to GET THEM! Many students view essay revision as a mere formality. However, unless you’re a bestselling author who does his own copy-editing, you need all of the input that you can get! You should have your parents, teachers, and counselors review your essay, in addition to obtaining a professional opinion .
Once you’ve compiled essay reviews, you should read them and carefully consider each revision, especially suggestions about the structure and content of the piece (you need not pay much attention to grammatical corrections unless they come from your English teacher or professionals ; far too many potential reviewers consider a semi-colon and a comma to be interchangeable). Though you may not wish to incorporate every reviewer’s thoughts, they will spur your imagination as to what your essay could eventually become.
At this point you must take care to use your own voice when making revisions. One of the best ways to do this is by considering every suggested revision, then stashing-away the essay reviews and making corrections to your own work. This method helps to prevent you from accidentally copying the reviewers’ exact phrasing.
The last step in this process is to repeat, repeat, REPEAT! After you’ve revised your essay, obtain more reviews. In fact, our editing service offers price breaks for subsequent essay revisions.
Perhaps the best (and only) way to use essay reviews to write a good essay is to get them and use them. Far too many students make the mistake of self-editing. By obtaining and paying attention to essay reviews, you’ll help to put yourself ahead of the game.
(Awkwardly informal, written in the second person, poor vocabulary).

This article was contributed by Dakota Meyers, who just completed his freshman year at Yale University and is a regular contributor to the CollegeTreasure.comandAdmissionHook.com blogs. He is a 2009 graduate of Hoisington High School in Hoisington, KS. At Hoisington High, he won varsity letters in debate, speech, scholars’ bowl, and band. He won the 2009 3A Kansas State Championship in extemporaneous speech.

At Yale, Dakota intends to major in Economics and Mathematics. He writes for the campus publication Business Sphere and is an active member of the Yale chapter of Nourish International. He also participates in the Yale Political Union as a member of the Independent Party.

As a current college student, Dakota has recent first-hand experience with the college admission process.

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